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happy_little_onion
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| Posted: Jun 2, 2004 11:23 pm Post subject: Haiku - the art of japanese poetry |
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Ok, for those that don't know what a Haiku (Hi-koo) is here's a quicky explanation. They are really easy, simple poems moslty inspired by nature. They follow a specific form - the first line has 5 sylables, the second has 7, and the third and final has 5 also. I doesn't matter about how many words as longas the sylable count is exact.Oh, and there are no rhyming words either. I love hakiu's, I think they are so sweet and I love writing them. Here's one about beans.
small orange wonderful
simple ad small, nutritious
beans are fabulous
I hope this inspires more veggie-orientated haikus!
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Mick
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vegans, forum posts!
we need lots more posting.
where the heck are you! |
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dragonfly
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Posts: 73
Location: Strawberry Fields Forever
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| Posted: Mar 11, 2005 12:39 am Post subject: Re: Haiku - the art of japanese poetry |
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| happy_little_onion wrote: |
Ok, for those that don't know what a Haiku (Hi-koo) is here's a quicky explanation. They are really easy, simple poems moslty inspired by nature. They follow a specific form - the first line has 5 sylables, the second has 7, and the third and final has 5 also. I doesn't matter about how many words as longas the syllable count is exact.Oh, and there are no rhyming words either. I love hakiu's, I think they are so sweet and I love writing them. Here's one about beans.
small orange wonderful
simple ad small, nutritious
beans are fabulous
I hope this inspires more veggie-orientated haikus! |
those greedy humans
always wanting more not less
death and destruction |
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AndyBa
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my english is weak,
and I don't really care
who needs these numbers? |
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dragonfly
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| Posted: Mar 11, 2005 11:46 pm Post subject: |
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| AndyBa wrote: |
my english is weak,
and I don't really care
who needs these numbers? |
Well i guess that substance over form is important.  |
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AndyBa
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| Well i guess that substance over form is important. |
a piece of hard ore
used to lie deep under ground
the sword will kill many |
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dragonfly
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on and on it goes
only to serve the wicked
to serve the unjust |
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AndyBa
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| Posted: Mar 13, 2005 1:09 am Post subject: |
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| just wanted to say that the form somtimes is important |
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AndyBa
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a lot of hard work
only to get some freedom
that beautiful spring |
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Alistar
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a glass of red wine
with my lady half naked
just live this moment
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dragonfly
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| Posted: Mar 19, 2005 11:26 pm Post subject: |
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wondering about
the future holds too much grief
needless suffering |
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AndyBa
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the future inside
your mind is very busy
way too much thinking |
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dragonfly
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| Posted: Mar 31, 2005 2:33 am Post subject: |
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the future looks bleak
what does it really matter
refusing to think |
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AndyBa
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two bright spots
two yellow eyes shining
in empty darkness
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GreenBro
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that tipe of poetry makes you think about words in part .... and all this becouse in some words we cann not tell completly what we wanted to say ... i like to read it ... but not to write  |
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